Dear Sir or Madam,

As a senior student majoring in Management, I can attest to the generally high quality of our institution’s online courses. However, I believe there is room for improvement.

First of all, when it comes to fluency, the network, which we students utilize daily, has not yet reached the level of satisfaction that I believe it can and should achieve. In addition, it is reasonable to assert that the quality of online courses is of paramount importance and in need of significant improvement. It is my hope that my suggestions will prove beneficial.

I appreciate your time in reading this correspondence. I am available at your earliest convenience should you require further information.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming